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Re: Moral Zero - Part II
Thanks again for the review. Don't worry, there's a lot more explanation to slowly come into the story, but it will be a thing that comes over time in the ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Moral Zero - Part I
Thanks for your reply Iggy. I should say right off the bat that I'm well aware of quotation and apostrophe rules and I'm still not about to include them any ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Moral Zero - Part III
Thanks man! It means a lot, truly. I'd be amazed if you were on board with Black right off the bat, if ever. But there's a lot more to come ...
Jan 25, 2014 -
Re: (Help choose a name) Chapter 1
The film Salo is based on 120 Days of Sodom and is a very difficult watch. But the more conventional film Quills is based on Sade's life (he's where the ...
Jan 24, 2014 -
Re: (Help choose a name) Chapter 1
Just saw you were 14. Very impressive writing for a 14 year old! I wrote absolute tripe at that age. 120 Days of Sodom is the most controversial book by ...
Jan 24, 2014 -
Re: Moral Zero - Part II
Thank you so much! I frequently give up but I always seem to bounce back eventually. Being an unpublished writer isn't easy for anyone. Comments like these make it more ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Moral Zero - Part II
Don't apologise, I love it! haha. Well, it's just that you as a writer know how valuable feedback is. I've been sitting on this story looking with frustration for an ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Moral Zero - Part II
Thank you for your reply ladcat. I must say it's nearly unheard of for someone to backtrack on themselves on the internet. I respect you a lot for that. And ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Moral Zero - Part II
This is the best feedback I've had so far. You seem to totally be on my wavelength here with it all. I'm really glad you like it. Given all you've ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Moral Zero - Part II
Thanks Snoink :)
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Moral Zero - Part II
Actually, I think I was a bit heavy handed with that last reply. I just found your comment pretty patronising. Thank you for the words that concentrated on the actual ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Moral Zero - Part II
Erm, how about no?! Jesus Christ, don't read my stuff! The world isn't all fairies and pixies you know. I've rarely read a more puffed up and irritating comment. Would ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Moral Zero - Part I
Part 2 up! Hope you like. Formatting is proving to be an absolute headache.
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Moral Zero - Part I
Thanks :D I'll put part 2 up in a few days.
Jan 12, 2014 -
Re: The Pact - Prologue Rewrite
Really well written, I enjoyed this. I can't think of any complaints. Nice descriptions but not overly described, great dialogue too!
Jan 11, 2014