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Thanks for the comments Kyllorace.

Thank you very much ladcat! :)

Thanks for the review and all your positive comments! I'm glad you enjoyed it. The Red Dream I felt would be a disservice to the mind of Red if it ...

Thanks for the review! Rule is a city for tourists, and previous parts have shown how easy it is to cross the borders. There is little to no communication and ...

Wow really? Thank you so much!

Perhaps, perhaps. Although I want them to bat eyelashes, to make them uncomfortable is my point :P I've always thought if it was published, the best way to promote it ...

I think perhaps your questions will be answered at a later point. For now think of Rule less a real city and more just a collection of places pushed together, ...

Thanks for the advice. Thing is my story isn't even in chapters. I've tried to split it into parts that have a suitable end to them, but chopping them up ...

Thanks for the review! No worries, you can reply whenever! I'm just happy someone's reading it lol. I'm glad you liked the stream of consciousness bit, as I've often considered ...

Thanks for the review! No worries, you can reply whenever! I'm just happy someone's reading it lol. I'm glad you liked the stream of consciousness bit, as I've often considered ...

Thanks for the review! No worries, you can reply whenever! I'm just happy someone's reading it lol. I'm glad you liked the stream of consciousness bit, as I've often considered ...

Haha. Thank you very much! I really enjoyed reading that. I never thought you'd have turned around this much :P You make a very good point.

Your reviews are what I look forward to most! Thank you for taking the time to write such encouraging things. I'm very happy the story is taking a personal note ...

Thank you very much :) Yeah run-ons are a stylistic choice, another thing taken from Cormac McCarthy although I don't fill a page in one sentence like him. It's creates ...

Thanks again for your comment, it is much appreciated. Your questions will, I think, all be answered in time with more parts. It is a very character-driven story and there ...