SerenityCross

CRAP!!! you make me look like a preschooler! I LOVE YOUR PIC!

Hey! Great story. I got a little confused with the way you wrote it, but I eventually figured it out. I find this very good and would LOVE to read ...

... (Bawls like a two year old) You made me so sad!!!!

*Shudders* Oh, God WHY DID YOU STOP!!!! This is so scary and You have a way of writing which makes me want to keep reading. Now, you've forced me to ...

Interesting and very clever. Ha ha SUCK IT MOON!!!

This is very good. I like fact that the killer is simply known as Tall Man. I really enjoyed it and can't wait for the next chapter! :)

I loved it from the first line. Sometimes the timing was a little off, and you udes a lot of complex words, but other than that, I loved it. :)

This is actually really good. I haven't got the Twilight princess but I;m familiar with the Legend of Aelda series. I think this poem is very well written. :)

Um... this story is a little confusing. Why does Liv's name changed to Liz before the end?

Hey. The only thing I had a problem was if Riley was a boy or a girl. Riely usually isn't a name I accociate with a girl. But, hey what ...

Hey. Great story. I think it was great how you've just launched us into the story like that. I can't wait to read more!

Thanks so much for your help! I am working on the next xhapter as we speak, and should be up later today. I look forward to your reviews!!

Very cool. Most of my stories involve the elements, but they have never actually talked before. I admire you for doing something different and original. Are you working on the ...

Very Cool. Can't wait to read more. You have some punctuation errors, but the rest is cool.