SereneSimpliciT

Hehehe, someone finally asked about the sexual intercourse thing...it's addressed later on ;) I'm glad you like the chapter, it seems everyone does for some reason XDD Yeah, I'll have ...

It's supposed to be QUARTZ, I guess I missed one XDD Thanks so much for the advice! I've never actually known how to correctly do dialogue in between actions, but ...

Before I go into the reply, I'm just gonna put this out there (totally irrelevant): That's so weird, because I just wrote something about a guy with the worn out ...

I'm not trying to be rude, far from it actually. If that's what it comes off as, I apologize. I'm just trying to share some of the knowledge I've gained ...

Sleep-walking, definitely. She's not really all there, it's more like when someone is drunk or on laughing gas, she's aware to an extent, but not to the point that she ...

I'd suggest you read the previous chapters then so it makes more sense to you XD ~Maddie

Thank so much! I hope you read more LAPIS ^^ ~Maddie

I'm glad you enjoyed it dear, I've been wanting to see a review from u Hope you continue to enjoy ~Maddie

Why thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)

Hopefully you'll read more, it's been almost a year since I originally wrote this, so maybe some of my newer work will show improvement and more to work on ^^

Wow, I actually cracked up at the rewrite of the thought about the parents and the matching sweaters. I died, please let me use that XD Wow, that was probably ...

Yeah, same here

I'm glad you enjoyed it Yeah, I'm bad with run-on sentences, sorry about that! I'd love to read your stuff, sounds interesting ..And yes, this was a slight rant/actual story...I've ...

If that's what you meant, change it to "shade". It'll make it less distracting and even more appealing to the ear You're welcome!

If that's what you meant, change it to "shade". It'll make it less distracting and even more appealing to the ear You're welcome!