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Re: Escaping the Lost City....
Hey there. I'm Ari, and I'll be your reviewer today. I'm in a rush so I can't go line-by-line, but I'll give you a detailed overview of what I think. ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Logan, Necromancer Chapter one
Hey there, I'm Ari, and I'll be your reviewer today. I'm in a hurry so I can't go line-by-line, but here are some tips for you. - In the beginning ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
The Clique by Lisi Harrison. It's TERRIBLE, and the other books in the series are even worse. That's all I can really say about it before I start to yell ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
The Underland Chronicles, by Suzanne Collins. Same author as The Hunger Games. I love these books. They're not perfect, but the concept is amazing and the characters are really well ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Darnit, I think we might have to read that for school soon. Now I'm suspicious. I despise whining. aye, don't let your teacher tell you it's a great book. You ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: Salvation's Show
Funny, if a tad insulting (yes, I am a Christian :p). Even so, I liked it. My only advice is to change the line about the cash a bit; it ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: My mind is broken v_v
I'd go with the boy, myself. Being a teenage girl, seeing a guy my own age would haunt me more than a guy without a face, for some reason. I ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: Run
As always, I tried my best to ignore the summons. 'Summons' is a good word here, but I'm not sure if the tense is right, or the number. "Summoning that ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: The Hunger Games
I haven't read this yet, but I'm a huge fan of Collin's other series, The Underland Chronicles. I'd suggest you read them as well; they're really good. That's the Unofficial ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: Lyrria; The Beginning- The Dream
First thing: I love the name. *steals* Okay, I won't steal it, but it's really pretty. The title's what drew me in in the first place. Her heart was going ...
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: Brisingr (Eragon 3) Spoiler
I'll be honest. I think I'm a better writer than Paoilini. Heck, I know that I'm a better writer. I'm not arrogant; it's a fact. Most of us here are ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: Twilight - A Reality.
Hah. This was actually very funny, but I do have an odd sense of humour. Just a few things, though: - I'd suggest a little bit more detail in the ...
Oct 23, 2008
