SeraphTree

Pleas space between paragraphs. Then I will crit. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Well, your sexual orientation at that age usually isn't a conscious thing, because, well.... you know. *Seraph's sheepish grin* :D Hm. I'm not sure you should use that. I mean, ...

Thanks Azila. Sorry, 'miniscule' was a typo. :( I thought I did use it correctly, but whatev. :D Haha! I didn't see that rhyme! :D I was trying to go ...

Hm. I suggest you reveal more feelings here. Make us feel what you feel. Other than that, cute. :D

Author 13 has a 'Death scene' contest. Thanks for the crit Wozzie. The work seemed rather weak, but I couldn't tell why. :D:D:D:D Thank you :D:D:D:D:D

BOM BOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have returned. :D First off, let me say that this is a very interesting concept. I'm interested as to why you call this place Nirvana. Now onto ...

OH... I see. XD Wow........... :D

Whoa, sorry about that. *smacks myself for being lazy* Anyway... :D What?” I cried out disbelievingly. 'Cried out' sounds a bit over done. I stomped to the door and opened ...

YW. :D:D:D:D I'm glad I could help :D

No, it's good that it was posted. I mean, when I post my work, I KNOW there are things that are little off, but I just can't see them. That's ...

I will crit this later. :D I have some stuff to do :D

Thanks you guys! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

NP. :D I'm always willing to help :D -.-" I know what you mean about needing a break. Everyone needs one once in a while :D

Please space between paragraphs. It's very hard to read at the moment :D:D:D

Please space between paragraphs. Then I will crit. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D