SeraphTree

Well, it was an interesting read, most definitely. :D I'll just jump in, mostly because I don't like mincing words. :) I could feel Cloud's concern for me in my ...

I don't have time for a full review, but I'd like to say that this part is very, very good. :D I like how you thickened the plot. I'll have ...

Hey, Bookgirl. :D It was getting harder to ignore, the need to use my powers. When I read your prologue, it was tough to tell who was talking/why/what was going ...

At first, you lost me with "once upon a time, he did this/she did that," but , skimming through the comments of Romance Otaku, I decided to keep reading. :D ...

'Sup, Silent. :D As with the mermaid story, I really liked this piece, but being the ever-realist, ( not really though) I noticed a few things. :D And it was ...

I must agree with the general consensus; wonderful story! :D I really enjoyed reading it. There were a few things though: ...Most merpeople make the journey up to the surface ...

Wow, I'm such a dork. I didn't even see your new post. Excuse me as I mentally thwack myself. :smt075 :mrgreen: The nose on her face was too long and ...

Hey, there, this is Seraph. :D First off, I must agree with the previous posts; write more!! It is quite intriguing. Her red hair and green eyes were certainly an ...

Hey there, Drawers, this is Seraph. :D I put it up as soon as I was in safe in the house, The bold can be deleted. ;) The plumber’s truck ...

Hey, Plennsterr, this is Seraph. :) The rolling and rocking of the ship beneath her did nothing to help Loretta balance under the blindfold. Neither, she thought, was the rank ...

Very good. :smt040 I really enjoyed this. Wynne woke to the sight of dappled sunlight speckling the backseat of the car. Her mother and father were talking quietly in the ...

First off, I really like how you ended this piece; it thoroughly creeped me out. :smt107 There were just a few tidbits I saw: The houses that were occupied were ...

I don't have time to critique your work right now, but I'd like to say that your writing has greatly improved! Your description of Sera and her family help them ...

Hey Dreamy. :D Sorry it's taking a while; I usually don't have access to a computer. :D The only thing I had was this: “DO NOT TEST ME, CHILD!” Nerezza ...

Hey, Dreamy! :D First off, I really, really like this part. You did a good job with description. Your first paragraph really captured me. :D The only advice I have ...