Semoyia

Thanks for your review, I'll go back and fix the grammatical errors when I get a chance to. I often get lost in writing my story or typing it up ...

No there's just one door, it swings out so when it's opened the girls would be hidden behind it. They brought the cat because she was there, no one really ...

The cliff hangers come in later, as for the punctuation and grammer, I know i'm completly hopeless with it. The conference is for Jackson to talk about the success he's ...

I`m narrating from whoevers perspective works at the time, sorry I didnt put the P.O.V, any story that I`ve read that switches P.O.V.`s didnt really point out that they we`re ...

I actually like it, it's easy for ANYONE to relate to and you used words that aren't often used anymore, you wouldn't believe how many people have to ask what ...

I actually like it, it's easy for ANYONE to relate to and you used words that aren't often used anymore, you wouldn't believe how many people have to ask what ...

Thanks, I've been looking for a good website for advice about my stories for forever. I know the story has a lot of editing issues, I kinda get lost in ...