SeleneForeverDream

Oh, I should have reviewed this a while ago.. well, better late than never. Length - I loved. I would have preferred more, but considering the circumstances I think it ...

Well done on this chapter, I loved it! It's another excellent chapter for an excellent story. I think most of the error were found by your other replies, so no ...

I have a lot of mixed emotions about this chapter. Firstly, I thought it was very funny. Quite an amusing chapter, so congrats. Second, I thought it was just a ...

I don't care what you say, that was an excellent chapter. I think the humor makes up a lot for the missing romance, but I can wait. And it is ...

Wow, that was excellent! At first when I read about Helen's period I was thinking, What boy would speak so freely on the topic? but it shows the relationship between ...

Wow, that was amazing! This was a very gripping story that had my heart literally pounding out of my chest as I read it. As Krupp has mentioned, your imagery ...

Wow that was an amazing chapter that literally had me laughing to tears. Now that I really know your characters it's easier to laugh at their typical misfortunes. :D I ...

Awww *cries uncontrollably* that was probably the saddest poem I've ever read on YWS. *wipes tears away* That was truly beautiful. Anyway, back to reviewing. I wanted to say I ...

Oooh, I loved this! The bond between the two sisters is so sweet that it reminded me of my little sister. The world you've created is wonderful and exciting! Your ...

This is free verse, right? It seems that this was directed at a person in particular, not to a general audience, yet I thought it was quite good. Your title ...

That was an excellent poem that I truly enjoyed! I caught this one little error: Some read it on Google just this last may. May should be capitalized. That's all ...

WOW!!! :shock: I did not see that coming! Melody and Nathan... hmm... Well, that was an extremely interesting chapter. I must admit I was sad to see no romance, but ...

I liked this chapter a lot, but I think it would have been even better if it was longer. So far I don't know the characters, only that Nichole gets ...

This chapter just seemed to slow for me. Your on chapter 14 and you haven't even gotten to the romance yet. I mean, I enjoy every word you write, but ...

That was excellent, Meep. I haven't read about religious fiction in a long time, not to mention a historical religious romance story. That was very interesting to read about, because ...