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Re: Music and fury
Wow I really like this piece! I really liked the flow and the rythym or it and I also liked how you used other lyrics in the poem, but it ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: Facing reality
wow, what a touching piece. It really hit me hard, but in a good way. It definently opened my eyes to the blessings and oppurtunities I have in my life. ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Expression
This piece was really unique, and I've never thought of music and dancing that way, being a dancer myself. It definently let me see dancing in a different point of ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Do you ever
I really liked it and I could definently relate to it. My only problems is at points the lines didn't flow together. The rythym of the poem was off at ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Shattered
wow talk about a depressing piece. i really liked it though and it was very well written. there were a couple of times where the flow of the poem was ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Gravestone
I really liked the pretense behind the story, and i was drawn in. The ideas dont really flow together in the beginning when you start talking about the therapy stuff. ...
Aug 18, 2011
