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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Music and fury

    Wow I really like this piece! I really liked the flow and the rythym or it and I also liked how you used other lyrics in the poem, but it ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Facing reality

    wow, what a touching piece. It really hit me hard, but in a good way. It definently opened my eyes to the blessings and oppurtunities I have in my life. ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Expression

    This piece was really unique, and I've never thought of music and dancing that way, being a dancer myself. It definently let me see dancing in a different point of ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Do you ever

    I really liked it and I could definently relate to it. My only problems is at points the lines didn't flow together. The rythym of the poem was off at ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Shattered

    wow talk about a depressing piece. i really liked it though and it was very well written. there were a couple of times where the flow of the poem was ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Gravestone

    I really liked the pretense behind the story, and i was drawn in. The ideas dont really flow together in the beginning when you start talking about the therapy stuff. ...

    Aug 18, 2011


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