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Re: Floating
Definitely agree that it could use some punctuation to give it more definition, but overall a fabulous piece of work! Strong story and clear setting. Great job!
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Darkness Unpolluted
Oh WOW! The depth here... the story... it's stunning! Great use of emotion and imagery. By far one of the most respectable pieces I've seen on this site.
Oct 4, 2009