ScribbleBug

Hi! Good piece! Wow! Okay, that was REALLY fast! I mean whiplash fast. First this then this then BAM! Her friend is in the ambulence. It was so fast that ...

This is so good! I really like it! The library is awesome, and I like how you put some fantasy but also realism into the character. The characters have emotions ...

Hi! This is a good story! But the story is really choppy. It doesn't run smoothly, like I'm sure it could. First, I don't get the first dialogue: “Simon! Let ...

Hi! Nice writing! I like the Percy Jackson spinoff! Okay, so review now. The whole thing was really short, and didn't have hardly anything. I think there should be more ...

Hi! Nice work. I like the lesson you included in it. But there are a lot if choppy, short sentences that should be combined so the whole page would flow ...