Schemilix

I'm going to just point out that flow is not a necessity of poetry and thus ignore that statement since it;s clearly a difference of taste. Not all of my ...

I'm going to just point out that flow is not a necessity of poetry and thus ignore that statement since it;s clearly a difference of taste. Not all of my ...

Assination: the process or making something assinine?

Yeah I guess I'll do that with the next one... It'd be neater too.

Chapter 2 moved to its own thread.

I pretty much addressed all that, thanks! ^^

As I said, thanks. I wonder if here's the place to post a link to a sketch of Captain Rage for anyone reading?

Oh yeah I know the real story of the tarot, Fool---->World etc. This ones story isn't the story of the tarot, rather the story of my CHARACTERS whom I have ...

Rosey: Yeah, as to who's speaking... I think it's quite clear: there's 'a voice' and then 'the speaker' and then his description. >_> As for that non-dialogue puntuation guide I ...

Thanks. And yeah, it is confusing, but oh well. Considering I've never come even close to such endeavours, I was relying on my characters. xD

I have replied to each of your reviews in turn, and again, thank you muchly. I would like to point out that the 'the beginning is confusing' criticism is wholly ...

Haha, thankye. I did mention 'the littlest graves' at one point. The grammatical screwery was deliberate, but I can see why it bugs you. Anyway I don't feel the need ...

*Nods* I do, somewhere. They fascinate me. As for the capitalisation thing, I didn't capitalise to make it flow and to draw more attention to what I DID capitalise - ...

Yeah I know stuff that just got written's never great but, it's never too early to start editing. xD

She walks past her dropout mother passed on the sofa surrounded by bottles. Stick a comma after surrounded, it'll just make it flow nicer. Right, overall. You start with 'she' ...