ScarredSecrets

Thank you for the feedback. I will definitely take your advice!

Thank you! I%u2019m glad you liked it and my message got through to people! Thanks for the advice!

Thanks! Yeah I see what you mean though about imagery thing.

Thank you for being honest. A lot of people seem to like that line (including myself) I%u2019m working on something but I might ditch it. The rhythm kind of got ...

Thanks!

Oh, thanks anyway ^^

Thank you! I can see what you mean about the color thing, it seemed kind of lame to me too. The sheep part is ones of my favorites as well.

Thank you so much for enjoying it. I see what you mean by the wolf isn%u2019t the mightiest beast. Thank you again!

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First things first. Your descriptions are phenomenal! It really creates a movie-like imagery for your readers. Pure beauty! It would take my entire lifetime to write a piece like that. ...

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First things first. Your descriptions are phenomenal! It really creates a movie-like imagery for your readers. Pure beauty! It would take my entire lifetime to write a piece like that. ...