ScarlettWinters

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thanks Metalmauzen for your review. The story is only an excerpt and i'm sure that's why there's some confusion. I will defiantly PM you when the story is more defined.

thanks so much you two, really helpful

thanks so much i really appreciate your input

thanks stargirl, don't apologize your review was honest. I appreciated it. I know this wasn't my best work,i went out of my comfort zone. I'm not a short story writer.

This is awsome. It makes me feel like saying, you know your a writer when you can relate to this its wonderfully dark. You write with so mch passion. I ...