ScarletDreams14

Lol, Jake from state-farm! I love reviews, thanks for giving me this one. It'll come in handy when I actually bother to fix the grammar and punctuation issues.

Lol

Thanks! It's really old and I haven't edited it yet so it's gonna be a bit rough. I'll work on it.

Thanks Aurora! Like I said this is tremendously old and isn't any of my recent work. This was written when I was WAY less experienced than I am now. It ...

It confuses me how different countries spell things like that, I'll get use to it eventually XD

Thank You! I'm glad I helped ;3

My grammar sucks, thanks for notifying me the mistake ;3

Also not really sure if I'll write more of this mostly because I have an entire novel to write and I can't keep going back and editing.

Your advice was really helpful and I am currently fixing the grammar and punctuation issues. I'm not really sure if I'll write anymore of this because I still have an ...

Yes please. ^^

ThankYou so much! I'll take word to your advice! Oh and do you watch Swords Art Online?

ThankYou! I appreciate this a lot, and I did notice a few mistakes I'm not a quality writer and I'm rather inexperienced I'll fix it.

Thanks for the review! I will fix that, I have this issue with commas I tend to have bad punctuation...

Alrighty, thankyou Aurora! I'll fix it ^^

Hey there, sorry bout that. Shortly after I wrote that someone, one of my friends on here notified me I was being a little brutally honest and I should lay ...