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Thanks a lot! Glad you really liked it :). Yeah I really should start working on a bridge...or maybe a new song altogether!

I should really give my full review but if the "here is my mouth it will speak for you" is a bother what about, instead, "here are my lips, they ...

Thanks I'm glad you liked it However I respectfully disagree that the audience should have a tune in their head. My layout won't necessarily fit around a typical melody structure, ...

Hiya, thanks a lot actually most of what you said is spot on and I'm going to change bits and pieces. It's good to get an objective look. Also the ...

I actually rewrote that line but I must have forgot to edit. Serenity was one of the words I had put in instead. I hadn't decided however, there were a ...

Hey thanks loads for those comments :D!

Thanks! I was a little worried that the imagery of fireflies at night was a little overused but it seemed to fit in nicely. I guess I kind of thought ...

Hey thanks glad you liked it. And yes that is the crux of it, I am ALWAYS reprimanding myself for not appreciating things when they are there and ALWAYS wanting/thinking ...

Thanks. I'm wondering what you found confusing though. Here's my simple explanation: Essentially it's about the fact that when we remember, even good memories, even though they are happy, we ...

Thanks for your feedback. I wasn't that fussed about the stanzas to behonest, I was thinking about thatwhen I wrote it up last night but I didn't reallly take the ...

continued... It was so cold outside – mid December – so I wasn’t surprised. I’d got dressed in such a flurry I really wasn’t physically prepared. I was almost shocked ...

I have smoked weed before lol.

Hi thanks, I take your points on board and appreciate your review, although with "realizing" I think it's spelled with an "s" in the uk and with a "z" in ...

Thanks! Yeah I know not giving you loads to go on lol. Yeah you learn about Nathan later, quite soon actually in sort of a flashback scenario between the main ...