Savvy123

I think this story has potential to go far but it is really confusing... I have no clue what is with the italics or who is 'I' half the time. ...

I am a fan of this story and plan to continue reading it. I have a bit of input for you though. First of, the plot is good so far. ...

I Love this story! Right from the begining your writin pulled me in, probably because I love reading about people from another world coming to ours. (Sci-fi) Your writing is ...