Satrena

Hay! Glad you found the sight. Thanks for the uplifting comment!

Thank you. Your criticism is gladly taken. I like your revision ideas. This is exactly what I am looking for when I post things. It will be a work in ...

Thank you. Your criticism is gladly taken. I am not the poetry type most of the time. This poem just came to me. I knew it was not perfect. If ...

ok, will do!

Very good story! I was going to try to review it but, someone already beat me to it. Keep writing, the more you write the better you get.

Thank you!

I love this poem! I am trying to write a book that is interesting to the teens but also is not entirely void of God. Could I possibly use your ...

Beautiful work! I loved that you did it from both perspectives. You are very talented to be able to create something like this. I hope you do not stop writing.