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Re: Security
Wonderful short story! I loved the foreshadowing and the twist at the end. The story only needed a bit more description. Describe the day, fast or slow, along with a ...
May 8, 2018 -
Re: Hitherto Unnamed - Part I
This is a wonderful beginning to a story. Though, I don't think I would have rated it 16+. The few bloody parts in here are not that bad. There is ...
May 7, 2018 -
Re: Glasses 2A
I love this! You are very talented. The transition from president to memory was very smooth. I liked how you added an idea from a different book. I presume that ...
Apr 11, 2018