Satrena

Wonderful short story! I loved the foreshadowing and the twist at the end. The story only needed a bit more description. Describe the day, fast or slow, along with a ...

This is a wonderful beginning to a story. Though, I don't think I would have rated it 16+. The few bloody parts in here are not that bad. There is ...

I love this! You are very talented. The transition from president to memory was very smooth. I liked how you added an idea from a different book. I presume that ...