Satira

okay, this is what i'm going to say. i'm not really nitpick, and i don't mind too much about grammar/spelling. i mean, that probably won't improve the quality of your ...

i loved the concept, and the rhyming was very clever. but it did seemed forced- like when you said 'adieu', and it didn't really fit- and the beat was a ...

Hi, I think you've planned this out very beautifully in your head-it's very vivid. One thing i would say, and that isn't necessarily a bad thing, is that you tend ...