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Re: I once knew a girl
I have to agree. I really liked the idea you have across here, and just hope it doesn't happen to me! Yes, there were spelling mistakes, but it looks like ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: An Ode To The Ocean
I just have one question: is this supposed to be a nonsense poem? another thing, maybe you could clarify what mail to mail means. other than that, looks good (unless ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Why Did You Have to Go?
That is really mature for a twelve year old, I must say. Very good. I like it a lot! Although maybe it might need a little punctuation in some places, ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Is It Heaven ?
I don't know how many people agree, but I personally think that "scream" is a bit of a harsh word for the style of poem you are writing. Perhaps you ...
Jul 9, 2010
