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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I once knew a girl

    I have to agree. I really liked the idea you have across here, and just hope it doesn't happen to me! Yes, there were spelling mistakes, but it looks like ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: An Ode To The Ocean

    I just have one question: is this supposed to be a nonsense poem? another thing, maybe you could clarify what mail to mail means. other than that, looks good (unless ...

    Jul 9, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Why Did You Have to Go?

    That is really mature for a twelve year old, I must say. Very good. I like it a lot! Although maybe it might need a little punctuation in some places, ...

    Jul 9, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Is It Heaven ?

    I don't know how many people agree, but I personally think that "scream" is a bit of a harsh word for the style of poem you are writing. Perhaps you ...

    Jul 9, 2010


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