SasaArchie

Hi there, I think it's really great poem and you used the right words for each sentences. But, you had that one misspell there; "And feel the warm sand within ...

Thanks for your feedback, this is my first time posting a real-life story so thank you so much for reading it, it's really build my self-esteem to write more:)

Hey, thank you so much for your feedback and the correction it really helps me out and makes me learn something:) I really appreciate it. I don't know how to ...