Sarge_Jr

Hey there Your story seemed scattered at first but i soon picked it up. It felt like too much work putting the peices together until, luckily, the story began to ...

I really liked that. Some parts where unrealistic, to be fair. If a plane hits water at speed its going to disintergrate, But other than that I thought the first ...

I have :) Loved it, but i feel i have grown out of it now. I might start reading again in the near future but for now ill stick with ...