SarcasticSpringRoll

nice job like the story thing you got going on here. The ending was pretty stellar and I like the word cotton webs and mound of mettle great job but ...

ok so I do not mean to be mean but it could use a bit of work her and there but other then that you have a pretty good thing ...

I have to say it was pretty good. The beginning was a bit confusing, but it definitely made me feel like I just had to read more! Sheeka was pretty ...