SaraiRayne

I really like this poem and how it reflects upon your emotions. I am a little curious to as of why you rhymed at some parts but did not at ...

Personally I found it beautiful. it was emotional for me also, which I absolutely love poems like that. You did stop rhyming after you got into it though, which confused ...

I didn't see any mistakes and this is a very intriguing story. I really like how the end says "Thank you, dear reader." it makes me feel like Evie is ...