SaraAnne

This is really strong writing. Well done on creating such a believable world. I enjoyed reading this. Quick things: "...for fear of bringing her wraith on his head." This made ...

The army’s camp was in the hills to the south of the now carrion-infested ground where the battle had taken place. I'm not sure if something can be "infested" with ...

Hello there! =) I imagine that this would make more sense when seen in the context of the rest of the story but i enjoyed it none the less. I ...

I didn't think the dialogue went on too long...but then I think I might be guilty of that myself. If this is the prologue i was just thinking that you ...