Sampson

Thank you for reading, I had to write this on my phone so I expected some reviews on that, as long as there's noting wrong with the storyline I can ...

I assumed there would be a lot of errors, I wrote it on my phone while I was at lunch. I like all the changes you said and it'll try ...

I'm going to tell you right now, i honestly just liked because of the title, but i was not disappointed!

Absolutely love this story! You were perfectly descriptive and you painted a crystal clear mental image in my head. You conveyed the charters' personalities without doing to obsessively. I can ...

Did I just accidentally reply to your post? Oopsie daisy. :3

It isn't the kind of thing I enjoy reading... not because it isn't a good story, I just prefer to feast on some dramatic adult fic. So I'm afraid all ...

I just feel like I should mention really quick, the title is supposed to be ironic. Obviously its not the ordinary story because most people imagine a boy and a ...

Ooh... We were off to such a great start. Of course I always welcome criticism, however more often than not rapists aren't. But thank you for the comment. I read ...

I understand the whole bulky line thing, I just have trouble finding that separation, and yes I really am bad at poems. Writing them stresses me out but I felt ...

That makes sense to me, it really does, but I don't particularly see that bright and sunny world anymore. However I appreciate your criticism and will take that into consideration ...

About a year ago I probably would have thought the same :) and I admit I really do not write poems well, but this one just kinda came out of ...

Of course I am aware my writing isn't the best, I usually just write little stories like this for fun so I can reread them later, and about the abortion ...

I hate putting such shoddy up but I was just too eager to fix it. I'm currently in the process of making it better, its just that my problem is ...

That's the thing. The villains really are bias. And I am aware there are a lot of problems in the story. This was sort of a rough draft, I haven't ...

Beautiful! I thought I was a good writer but I'm starting to think I'm a bit out of my league. You created a very vivid mental picture. Your wording was ...