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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Boy

    Obviously, as everyone else has already articulated, very well done on the feel of the poem. It feels very "kiddy" in places, while still having words that a kid might ...

    Jun 17, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Conversation In a Diner

    Wonderfully simple. The scene really captures the sort of Southern restaurant with the obese elderly people that Pop Culture has drilled into our collective conscience. The "conversation" that was mor

    Jun 17, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lightning In the Office Of Reality

    The opening was certainly engrossing, in a sort of "I know more than you" way. The metaphor with the tracks on the album and the calm way in which you ...

    Jun 17, 2013


The first thing I do when I have a good quote is always to put a goat in it. uwu
— Liminality