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Re: The Boy
Obviously, as everyone else has already articulated, very well done on the feel of the poem. It feels very "kiddy" in places, while still having words that a kid might ...
Jun 17, 2013 -
Re: Conversation In a Diner
Wonderfully simple. The scene really captures the sort of Southern restaurant with the obese elderly people that Pop Culture has drilled into our collective conscience. The "conversation" that was mor
Jun 17, 2013 -
Re: Lightning In the Office Of Reality
The opening was certainly engrossing, in a sort of "I know more than you" way. The metaphor with the tracks on the album and the calm way in which you ...
Jun 17, 2013
