Samara1carter

Okay I will try to fix it... presently I've been trying to rewrite the whole thing over with everything people have told me to fix. And I promise that everything ...

Thank you for your input I'll be making a big huge flash back soon.... but it'll really just be filler in a way. Until I'm done editing the rest of ...

Thank you, I will take that in for account... But I did write this story last year, and its a bit harder for my eyes to find the mistakes sometimes, ...

Thank you so much for your input! I can't thank you two enough. I'm so happy that I have people like you helping me along the way. I'll make sure ...

Thank you for your input. I'm really trying to go back and edit something that I wrote almost a year or more ago... So I will constantly be editing it ...

Defiantly more to come. The only problem with me, is I don't tend to see where I screw up, at with the grammar and my friends have other things to ...

This is Utterly AMAZING!!!! you have me hook line and sinker. The Girl Who Ran will be a great book.

Thanks so much I'll try my best but I'm just pasting on from my document else where I really have like 359 pages ;/