Samara

lol. hey before_umbrellas. you seem somewhat familiar. have we met? but anyway, thanks for the comments, guys. it gets less depressing Adam...but it's gonna take a while.

hm, good point. i don't live in AZ, so i didn't catch that. i hope they make a movie! a good movie. there are all sorts of fake trailers on ...

hello. here's chapter two. just so you know, the chapters alternate between two different narrators. the name next to the chapter title is the name of the person speaking. this ...

hey, good thought. that was a little bit disjointed. thank you :D.

personally, i liked the scatterbrainedness :D. is that a word? i don't know. but i liked it.

thank you guys! i appreciate the input. let me explain just a few things: Eron and jewel are supposed to be cutesy names. you'll see :D. yes, i realize it ...

hehehe, i'm on a school computer right now and I had to try very hard to keep from laughing out loud. very good job.

dang. you're THIRTEEN? i am so incredibly jealous. i am four years older than you and can't write nearly that good. I applaud you. :D

thank you! actually, the style of this story is that all of the chapters are pretty short, because it switches back and forth between two character's perspectives.