SamWeeks

*thanks*

Thnks for the advice! :D

Firstly thank you very much for the advice on punctuation with Steve's dialouge, it's really helpful. I purposely missed puncutated Ezekiel's dialouge, (No spaces etc.) because I wanted him to ...

oh and I for got to put a full stop at the end of 'he stated' :P

Thanks for the advice Ben and good luck with 'Jack returns to France" ;)

don't worry, I will be posting more and thanks for the typo flag