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Thanks, guys! ^_^ I went back in and added a few sentences, but it didn't seem like a whole lot so...*bites fingernails* Yeah. I may need to add more. But! ...

*sigh of relief* Not cheesy! Hurrah! But, anyway, thank you guys, so much. I do love getting reviews; it's sort of like getting mail. ^_^ Few specific-type things: Claudette: Spelling...error? ...

*hides face* Ooer, I wrote this so long ago... Thanks, though, Mikey- and everyone else. ^_~ Precisely why I love YWS...the tips are still good, even a year and a ...

If it's a horror story, it doesn't need to make sense. Lord of the Rings makes absolutely no sense to me, and it's sold millions of copies.

Phwoar, another Ouran fanatic? Yes, the nineteenth century was rather an alarming place. o_o Anyway, you're welcome!

*dance of joy* Difficult things to respond to, but I'll try my best...^_~ Here's the thing- I'm from Nebraska. I'm about the most ordinary reader you're ever going to find; ...

*hugs CL* I do love your paper critiques; they are lovely, indeed... Especially the last point about the aunts' POV- that was something I would never have thought about, and ...

Thanks, guys! :D WD: Would 'shoes struck together' work, or would it just be clunky? Hmm... I shall fix the hand thing, though. Creepy, that the ruler is moving on ...

Hey, magicman! Ah, another excellent segement. Crystal's coming along nicely- and the whole conflict with her and her hallucinations is really expertly done. One problem, though- you had two unneeded ...

Thanks, Tri! Yeah, Claude said that Annabelle needs a little more fleshing out- that's my current mission. Hopefully, that'll help a little with the relative slowness. :wink: Deepness? *shies away ...

Thanks, Imp and Tri! :D IMP: Ergh. I love those adverbs a bit too much, I suppose...I'm about to try Fand's removal activity, and I shall see how many of ...

Bah, I'm rusty with the present tense, right? :wink: I'll definitely fix those. Question, though: would having it change from a limited perspective to an omniscent perspective kill the feel? ...

Thanks, Mat and JC! Ah, 'tis the day of unconvincing motives. In the Pirates storybook, my character rants on about not having a uniform: JACK: There weren't any uniforms at ...

scrambled_pages: Ooh, cool! That's grand- I didn't even realize I was doing that. Hmm. I fixed the sentence, as per request- though I changed the second 'made' to 'paid'. Rhymes, ...

Thanks, Roy and JC! It's not going to be a short story...I don't think. I'm going to edit this section further and play around with the plot cards for a ...