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Hey! Sorry it took me so long, but thanks for the critiques, guys. ^_^ I'm going to try and get the next part of this up sometime in the near ...

Oh, Cal. These are so perfect, as usual--I can't thank you enough. ^_^

Oh, Cal! Ezra + Millie = Awesome Sauce. I really don't think I need to dwell on that any longer. :wink: In this one, you did a lot of cool ...

Edward Bloor is fabulous--or at least he was three years ago. I really enjoyed that book; it's a lot edgier than most of the other YA things you get. If ...

Hey again, Monki! I've got to say, the more I read this story, the more I can empathize with Teeya. It's great that he's found himself, and whatnot, but...ouch. XD ...

Thanks for the critiques, guys. ^_^ Keirab--was it dramatic to the point of being annoying? If so, can you put up with it for a chapter or is it simply ...

Hey! Sorry it took me so long for me to get back to you guys--but thank you so much for reading. ^_^ I've been scatterbrained as of late, so hopefully ...

Hey, guys--check the dates. This was posted more than three years ago.

*is grooving* I think I've groveled at your feet more than is humanly possible, but seriously, Cal. You're amazing. ^_^

*giggle* I know. My mom's a shrink, so I kind of have permission to make fun of it. :wink: If it's truly terrible, I can change it, but my main ...

The second book was truly angsty. XD Yeah. I don't know. They're kind of cute, but it's something that you can get tired of really easily.

Oh, goodness, Volant! I wrote this a really long time ago. XD But you're totally right. I still have a problem with that to this day. Thanks for the critique, ...

Oh, goodness! *tackles with love* You're amazing, Haley. I'm trying to find a way to define the sparrows--I have a really symbolic paragraph later on, but that's much later, and ...

.White.Poem.- Welcome to YWS! Of course it helped. ^_^ Thanks for the review--and this is only the first part. There'll be at least two more. Aedomir- *hides from English teacher* ...

I was working on this today and realized that I'd completely forgotten to thank you all! I'm terribly sorry--I've been playing with your suggestions all day long and forgot. How ...