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Re: DFTS
Hey, Trident! A whole lot of ado about nothing...very Heller-esque. :wink: The voice was very funny, and the dialogue crisp and easy to understand- even without tags! *claps giddily* Anyway, ...
May 8, 2007 -
Re: A Pillar of Salt
Simply combine him- "I think I felt uncomfortable, but there was no more time to think." :D I believe the reason that I admired this piece for how well-written it ...
May 5, 2007 -
Re: Clara's Diary entry 1-5
Hey there, M.B.! Ooh, I was majorly excited to see a Civil War piece up- such a fun time to research, no? I really enjoyed yoru style and you made ...
Apr 30, 2007 -
Re: The YWS Recent Books List Nominations
I second [i]The Perks of Being a Wallflower[/b]. I'd consider that 'classic', but it falls into the category of Good Things That Very Few People Read. Bloody Jack - L.A. ...
Apr 21, 2007 -
Re: The YWS Classics List Nominations
Ooh, good idea...I'm certain some of these have been listed already, but seconded nominations could be helpful. Catch-22 - Joseph Heller The Brothers Karamazov - Fyodor Dostoyevsky Anna Karenina - ...
Apr 21, 2007 -
Re: POD 2- Poison Gas
Hey, JC! (Hehe, best nickname I could come up with. Any suggestions?) I absolutely adore your writing style- it's very nice and personal, but at the same time it's very ...
Apr 11, 2007 -
Re: By Ellen Hopkins-Crank, Burned, & Impulse
I had mixed feelings about Burned- yeah, some of the poems were really good, but it focused too much on 'Dad is a bad guy' and 'I should be able ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Mortalitarian Rule.
Hey, there, Inertia! I always love reading your stuff...it's very intelligent and well-thought-out, very psychological. Good pieces to read. :D One major thing: EXPERIMENTIVE FICTION AND PLOTS (OR LAC
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Heroine Addiction: A Genesis of Sorts (#4)
Ooh, I love Margo more and more- she is herself, even in the midst of strange circumstances. Excellent character development, I've gotta say. :D I also loved the comments on ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Flames of Lecraesa: Chapter 2 (A Ruined Courtyard)
Hey again, WD! Ooh, more conflict with Strick and new surroundings, yet. Quite good stuff. I've even established a habit, now- I finish my math homework, and then sit with ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Night Whisperings
Hey, Lady Pirate! This was a super-awesome story- very creepy, but you interspersed just enough real-life to keep it universally interesting. I hope there'll be another chapter... A few things, ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: POD 1- On Both Accounts
Hey! Ooh, I really enjoyed this story- teen angst, with a twist. The way you put it together was quite unconventional, too...I especially loved the italicized paragraph of the prologue. ...
Apr 10, 2007 -
Re: Flames of Lecraesa: Chapter 1 (Sray-Valom)
Hey, WD! Bah, you and your awesome first lines. Basically? They rock. I'll start with the things that I noticed first (so I don't forget them), and then I'll go ...
Apr 8, 2007 -
Re: About Linda
Hey, MJ! ...ooh, I do love the title. It's very simple, and Linda is a plain name- meaning, she's interesting in some way. I also like the idea of the ...
Apr 7, 2007 -
Re: Syradrum 1 (Falling)
Hey, Roy! This was a very good read- the conflicts and the characters were interesting and your setting was nicely described. With your story I got a panorama...a lot of ...
Apr 7, 2007
