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Re: What if Beauregard Was a Giant Chicken?
Hey, Theo Hart! Haha, this was a great piece. I really loved the way you set it up--the introduction is fantastic. From there on out, it's just weird enough to ...
Aug 7, 2008 -
Re: Kate Has 8 Lives :Chapter 5
Currrrly! Oh, goodness, I love Kate. XD The allusions to Jack were neat, too, because I've kind of missed him. I can't wait to see what Kate's gong to do ...
Aug 5, 2008 -
Re: Turquoise Chapter Four
Hey, KBrowlingmeyerFAN! Yay! Another good chapter. I'm kind of enjoying the grandmother--she's got quite some spunk; enough to keep up with her granddaughter. XD -- Make sure that you give ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Khalilzad in 1995 (Chapter five)
Pattycakes! Oh, goodness, this was another chapter that I thoroughly enjoyed--especially the discussion of African charities and the outline of over-used debate cases. XD It's so true! You never cease
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Mutts - Not Enough
Hey, GryphonFledgling! Ooh, this sounds cool. I would love the link, if you'd be so obliged. ^_~ This piece was really neat--it's a conflict that's been brought up in a ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Smoke Follows Beauty- Part Three
Hey, Bitter! Agh! Change the subject, much? ^_~ It was frustratingly good--the whole thing is just as quick and ill-fated as their teenage affair. And I love the looking at ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: A Siren's Ballpoint
Kylan! Oh, cringe . There was no gore spillt, but goodness. XD Do-it-yourself-castration is never easy to read with a settled stomach. I loved the ending of this, as well--the ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: A Siren's Fingerpaint
Kylan! Ohhh, my goodness. You did not just make an amazing symbol-- there's blood on her hands = there's ink on her hands . Good God. Stop being brilliant, I ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: A Siren's Voicebox
Hey, Kylan! XD I have to say, I loved the "partaken of a bitter cup" line, just because it's very KJV. If you're going to write a story about sin, ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Smoke Follows Beauty- Part Two
Hey, Bitter! Okay, so the last line is completely innocent and perfect . I love it! The characters are really interesting when we get to see them from all different ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Mixed Emotions
Hey, Hopeless Romantic! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ Ooh, a horsey Pride & Prejudice girl. She's a great character, even though the poor dear has to be married off to some ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: The lost soldier 4
Hey, Willow! Awww, the last part! That's too bad. XD I looked forward to new pieces of these that you posted. You wrapped up the end very nicely, and did ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: ww1 Short Story
Hey, chaplin! Good job on following the reviews-to-stories ratio. ^_~ Welcome to YWS! If you ever have any questions about the site or life in general, don't hesitate to PM ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: The Christine Experiment #1 - The End
Jaaaaared! Okay, so not only do you rule for reading like, everything I've ever written, but this piece was fantastic. I can't wait to see where you'll go with it ...
Aug 3, 2008 -
Re: Petra pt 1
*pants* Hey, Olivia! I'm here! Quick note--I know you asked me to review this, but normally I wouldn't, just because I'd be looking through and go, "Oh! This person has ...
Aug 3, 2008
