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Re: Second Chance Ranch
Hey, RedNeckGirl! Welcome to the site. ^_^ I hope you like hanging round here- it's quite a fun place to be, and everyone's really cool. If you've ever got questions, ...
Aug 11, 2007 -
Re: The Silver Locket
Hey, Lynlyn! Ooer...you tried something new. *high fives* And it worked! That's always a cool feeling, no? That wedding scene- and the scene preceding, where they were dressing- made my ...
Aug 10, 2007 -
Re: the man who lost his shadow
*does Roman emperor thumbs-up thing* She lives! This definitely goes on my list of my most favorite unpublished things, ever. Ever . You read my mind before I critiqued- you ...
Aug 10, 2007 -
Re: The Accused
Clau-chan! Very yummy story, as usual- the narrative doesn't draw too much attention to itself, leaving the dialogue in the spotlight, but under closer inspection...it's totally yummy. *attempts to ma
Aug 4, 2007 -
Re: Daddy's Baby Ruth
Hey, Wiggy! Very cute story- you've got the little kid speech down pat. And I loved it how it wasn't too sappy, and didn't go on and on about confusion ...
Jul 27, 2007 -
Re: The Astronaut's Wish
Hey, Tinny! *dances* Hurrah! My inner nerd was going insane over that novae picture; I'm so glad someone entered. I think I shall? But now's not the time to ramble ...
Jul 20, 2007 -
Re: Grasp of Reality
Hey, wildlove! Ooh, creepy and morbid- two of the things I love most in books. Your character was well developed, but she wasn't super-biased [read: emotional], and so the narrative ...
Jul 20, 2007 -
Re: Insomniac Dreaming -Part 1-
Hey, TheForgottenAuthor! Cool story- dark and dreary, but with an edge to it. That's a pretty cool effect, don't you think? It was easy to read, too, which helps a ...
Jul 19, 2007 -
Re: Art of the Saber
Hey, SoCalCub! This was totally a cool story for me- I'm a martial artist and I speak Japanese. ^_^ And, if it was not enough that you combined two of ...
Jul 19, 2007 -
Re: The New World
Hey, Joe! *fangirl squeal* Tama-kun kawaii! Here's the thing I loved majorly about this: you wrote about yourself- read, an actual experience- and it wasn't dry or boring. Not that ...
Jul 18, 2007 -
Re: Shotgun - Chapter Two
Hey, Mikey! Again...another very good chapter. It's impossibly yummy- everything flows so well and is easy to read. I love it. ^_^ A few things, though: - Adam seems to ...
Jul 18, 2007 -
Re: Shotgun
Hey, Mikey! Cool story- your style was really easy-to-read, and the whole thing flowed through all of the drama. I can see it's going to be one of my guilty ...
Jul 15, 2007 -
Re: Speak
I didn't like Catalyst quite as much, but Speak was both angst-filled and good. Odd, for me to like it? ...yes. It's just so honest in a way that most ...
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: The Park
*celebratory disco inferno* Joe! How's it been, mate? Anyway, your writing is beautiful, I must say- everything's neat and orderly and stylistic, and you streak with your dialogue effectively (that ...
Jul 10, 2007 -
Re: Memories
Yeah, I think it'd be a lot better without the dream...kind of a cheap plot twist, if you ask me. ^_~ A lot easier just to scrap it, right? Hey, ...
Jul 8, 2007
