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Re: When Souls Become Demonic
You can extend it . Its pretty unclear . Apart from that its good . But its really hard to grasp , share the full story ! This one is ...
May 2, 2013 -
Re: When Souls Become Demonic
You can extend it . Its pretty unclear . Apart from that its good . But its really hard to grasp , share the full story ! This one is ...
May 2, 2013 -
Re: Eternal Love
some sentences are a bit off , i did not understand the message as well , but the scenes and emotions are pretty good . You can us it in ...
May 2, 2013 -
Re: Eternal Love
Things just did not feel right It started well but I Am sorry I did not get it :/
May 2, 2013
