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@ForeverYoung299 @VengefulReaper

Thank you for the review! All the comments made are much appreaciated! I hope I've fixed at least some, if not all of the things you've mentioned in the following ...

@ForeverYoung299 @VengefulReaper

Thanks for the review! Apologies for calling Yuki a 'baby doll' during the fight. I just have a number of expressions describing each character that work as a substitute for ...

@ForeverYoung299 @VengefulReaper

I think giving Asher as much focus as Ethan is a good idea, especially if they prove over time that they are even more polar opposite characters than they appear ...

Thanks for the review! The Summerbolt and Blackscale families have a reputation among both deviants and ordinari. In time you will learn how big their reputation actually is. As for ...

Thank you for the review! The connections with the police Saya mentioned are related to a very important secret about her past that has purposefuly been kept hidden from Hikaru. ...

@ForeverYoung299 @VengefulReaper

Thanks for the review!! Grak's platoon consisted entirely of ordinari, only him, the leader, being a deviant. And that is strange indeed. Dangerous, as well. The ordinari have had ample ...

Thank you for the review! About the organization Grak's platoon is a part of, not to worry. You'll see plenty more of them. More about Yuki's abilities will be revealed ...

@ForeverYoung299 @VengefulReaper

Thank you for the review! Yuki was told earlier by Hiikaru that she has a superstrength and superspeed deva which she had only used by instinct up to the point ...

I can relate ro rewrting your work many times. I've done it myself all too often. As we're the ones who write it, we're always the most critical towards our ...

Thanks for the review! Some of the chapters are going to be very action-heavy, even more than this one, because the clashes between deviants will be one of the main ...