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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 15: At the Octohorn Ring
@ForeverYoung299 @VengefulReaper
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 14: Song's Not Over
@ForeverYoung299 @VengefulReaper
Apr 10, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 13: Start the Change
Thank you for the review! And I'm very sorry your first review got deleted and you had to write it all over again. Makes me appreciate even more than you ...
Apr 9, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 13: Start the Change
@ForeverYoung299 @VengefulReaper
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 3: Answers
Thank you for the review! I'm very grateful about your comments both on footnotes and refering to characters by their last name and those have already been fixed in some ...
Mar 29, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 12: Meet the Elite
Hey! Thank you for the review! Concerning the characters, I'm very pleased with the impression you've been left with about them so far. It is precisely what I wanted. I ...
Mar 28, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 12: Meet the Elite
@ForeverYoung299 @VengefulReaper
Mar 27, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 11: The Joy
Thank you for the review! About the teachers' output, because they are fully grown adults, their devas are stronger than the students who are still growing and thus if they ...
Mar 26, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 11: The Joy
@ForeverYoung299 @VengefulReaper
Mar 23, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 10: Queen's Feast
Thanks for the review!! About the description of the characters' abilities and techniques during the battle, this is a trope very often used in manga/anime (the medium I'm hoping my ...
Mar 22, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 10: Queen's Feast
Thank you for the review! About the focus of the story, it's mainly Yuki's tale, showing how from someone who has nothing she becomes a person with more and more ...
Mar 20, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 10: Queen's Feast
@ForeverYoung299 @VengefulReaper
Mar 19, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 9: What's For Lunch?
Thanks for the review! Alongside the main trio (Yuki, Hikaru and Seiren) Vega, King, Exo and Tokura will be the other main characters and I wanted them to enter the ...
Mar 17, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 2: Amnesia, Anger Issues and Perversions
Thanks for the review! I included the part about Seiren buying clothes because I wanted to give him an introduction that would give the readers a good idea of the ...
Mar 16, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 8: Crazy Home, Crazy School
Thank you for the review! About the portion of text you mentioned, in my story one cannot have superstrength, superspeed and certain other abilities just by themselves. In order to ...
Mar 13, 2022