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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 12: Meet the Elite
Really appreaciate the review! Zoran was just quietly observing the fight to see how it went, being ready to step in at any moment should the need for that arise, ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 11: The Joy
Thanks for keeping up with the reviews! I've never seen anyone write so many in such a short amount of time, so I'm very grateful for all the effort you're ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 10: Queen's Feast
Thank you for the review! As tacky as it sounds, all the questions you have will be answered in the following chapters, so I'll leave it at that.
May 26, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 9: What's For Lunch?
Appreciate the review!! The characters I introduce here are supposed to sound over-the-top and a bit unnatural to give a not entirely adequate first impression of who they are. Plus ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 8: Crazy Home, Crazy School
Thanks for the review! Hikaru will indeed age slower than normal people once he reaches full maturity and when he does age, he'll eventually turn into a child. But needless ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 7: The Family's All Together
Thank you for the review!! The matter with Rose will be addressed in the very next chapter, so fear not. And about the pace, the next two chapters are quite ...
May 26, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 6: The Fiery Mom
Appreciate the review! Yes, POVs are going to switch with pretty much every chapter, so everyone can get a chance to shine %u2013 something I firmly believe in. The big ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 5: A Warm Welcome
Thanks for the review! About using different names for the characters, that's something I do with each one, because I don't like reading through a text with the same name ...
May 26, 2022 -
Re: Chapter 4: Mission Failed
Thank you for the review! You can review chapters at your own pace, that's OK. And even if you don't write a review, it's still fine. As long as you've ...
May 26, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 15: At the Octohorn Ring
Thank you so much for the review!! Your conclusion that Yuki has tempered down Hikaru and Seiren's rivalry is more spot-on that you know. One could say that is one ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 13: Start the Change
Thanks for the review! I realized I can add descriptions of smell, touch, etc. when you pointed that out in the review of the previous chapter, so I'll be sure ...
May 17, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 12: Meet the Elite
Thanks very much for the review! I was pretty sure I split the description sentence for Zoran in two, but I guess I should've checked again. Also, I had no ...
May 16, 2022 -
Re: Iceflame// Chapter 11: The Joy
Thank you for the review! You're right I need to work more on describing characters' reactions to injuries. I hope I've done better in the battle chapters to come, but ...
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 17: The First One
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Re: Iceflame// Chapter 16: The Challenge
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Apr 20, 2022