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Hey! Salis here with a review!! First up, to answer the questions you've given. About choosing which of the two chapters should be the first one and which – the ...

Hello, hello! Salis here with a review!! Let me just say ... wow. What a first chapter. The fantasy elements were kept to a minimum here, yet I felt like ...

Hey! Salis here with another review!! The things I want to comment on are actually aligned with what you want to know, so I'll get right to it! I liked ...

Hey! Salis here with another review!! I like how this chapter focused on a single character. I think it's a good thing to do that every now and then and ...

Hey!! Salis here with another review! I'm just going to say it right from the start. This chapter is my favorite from all the ones from you I've read!!! I ...

Hello again! Salis here with my final review for this story!! I was smiling for most of this half of the last chapter and that is proof that I am ...

Hey! Salis here with a review!! First of all, let me just say it's great to have you back!! You were definitely missed, in terms of both continuing your story ...

Hey! Salis here with another review! This is it. We have reached the end (at least the first half of it). Was it the end I was expecting? Surprisingly, the ...

Hi! Salis here with a review!! I'm conflicted on Zoltar's thoughts from the beginning of this chapter. A part of me agrees with him on the matter that now that ...

Hey! Salis here with a review!! I'm starting to see a resemblance between Malcolm and Siren the more I read about them and I have to say I like it ...

Hey! Salis here with a review!! Is the description of everything in this chapter the best from you I've ever read? Yes, it certainly is. I've never enjoyed chapters with ...

Hey! Salis here with a review!! What happened here was bound to happen eventually, I guess, but it was still painful. The way you described Zoltar's experience as he confessed ...

Hi! Salis here with a review! The way Siren reacted to the whole situation in the beginning of the chapter really surprised me. I felt as if she was the ...

Hey! Salis here with a review!! First off, I love the way you structured the chapter. Each of the three acts it was split in took place during a different ...

Hey! Salis here with another review!! Finally we're getting to see some good action and I'm here for it! Nothing like a clash of supernatural opponents to get things going. ...