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Re: Metamorphosis
Hey! I really liked that! I think the storyline to it is really original, never read one like it.♥ As for grammer problems....I found none...! So I would say you ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: Solace From The Shadows
I am hooked! I love it. The most recent part of my novel has a rape incident in it too. I just think putting that twist in a story adds ...
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: Yes, What a Delightful Boy (2)
It definatly IS going somewhere! I love that story so you must keep writing or I'll die! I do think you could give a bit more imigary into locke (eg ...
Apr 24, 2009 -
Re: As if I was in Love Chp 3 (edited)
OMG YOU HAVVVEEE TO WRITE MORE OF THAT ! ! ! ! ! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it! it's very realistic and not over the top. Please please please write more?? ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Yes, What a Delightful Boy (1)
OMG YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!!!! I loved this because it's not like other romance stories, I try to write that way but sometimes I can go over the top ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Saved (part 4)
Even better than the last one! There is just one or two typos. When you said "tine went by faster" Should be "time". There isn't really anything wrong with it. ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Saved (part 3)
That was soooo just as good as the others you moron! lol I loved it. Not to put pressure on you but hurry up and write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the story is ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: Saved
Loved it!!!!!!!so so good! however i do think you could pull the part where she is being taken away out a bit more, maybe have Ian calling her name and ...
Apr 19, 2009 -
Re: Saved (part 2)
That was incredible! How did you write that?! I loved the emotion in it, it's so sad. . . But it's still awesome. . . Are you writing more? if ...
Apr 19, 2009 -
Re: Short story (No title, hehe.)
I liked most of it. She is very independent and I admire that. The only thing that was off to me was when she says she doesn't like popular guys, ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: Finding You, part 5
It was really good! I like how you put imagery emotion into it! It's got a very sweet storyline to it, dramatic but not too much. However I do think ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: Really?
I liked it! I thought it was very cute. Not over the top, just right. The only thing wrong is where you kept switching tenses. Is there more? I think ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: February
I thought it was very cute. It had me wondering what will happen next. The storyline is light and original, and it was enjoyable to read. Keep going! Can't wait ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Scared of Being Nothing
That was incredible! I found absolutely nothing wrong with it. I loved how you told it, so real. It is very emotional but at the same time it is absolutely ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Bloodlust - Chapter Two
I thought it was really good. But i do think at the first two paragraphs you put just a little too much of a poetic twist into it. Other than ...
Apr 7, 2009