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Re: the pit of the madman
Hi! I saw your poem and I thought it sounded interesting so I thought I might just take a look. Before I dive in let me just saw I am ...
Nov 15, 2013 -
Re: Why You?
That was beautiful. It must have been a strong relationship for the narrator to want to die in their place. I really like how you had the void that was ...
Jun 20, 2013 -
Re: My Subconscious Journey
Whoa. That was goregess (excuse my spelling). Wow. And don't nock your poetry, I loved it. This piece has amazing creativity. You did change tenses, though. It worked with the ...
Jun 20, 2013 -
Re: I Think I Have Social Anxiety Disorder
Hi! Welcome to YWS first of all! And don't be sorry! I have a secret blog for venting, if that makes you feel better! I'm super sensitive- in a bad ...
Jun 20, 2013 -
Re: Above It All
Wow!!! That was a great story! And I don't normally read acrtic stories because they make me cold! I loved it and the description of the Aurora Borealis was beautiful. ...
Jun 19, 2013
