Sai9

Wow this is good pal! Nothing constructive to say here sorry just vibes. Simple and sweet, makes me feel all warm. You really hit the mark on this one friend. ...

Dang that was really good pal, the rhyme scheme made it all the more impactful. Seriously I got into it, the visuals were great. Sorry I can't say anything constructive ...

Thanks a lot! that makes sense I'll consider this when writing my next poems I really appreciate this!

So for a little explanation I believe a Tanka is a haiku type poem meant for courting in Japan where someone starts the first half (which this is) and the ...