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Re: Like 98'
It was brilliant! You've done a really fine job with the free verse - narrated your nostalgia, taken us back with you to '98 to your family gathering some place ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Written in the stars
It reminded me of a Donne poem, I cannot remember which. It invoked a similar scenery and emotion. Decent write, I'd say. But you could've used fresher imagery or used ...
Oct 14, 2011