SIC

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First of all, I'd just like to say: Wow! This is a great piece of writing! It was amazingly descriptive and visual. Not only that, but the philosophies you portray ...

A little short but I liek it still.

I guess this is dead so...

Still prety cool tho

Original format FTW

A little odd reading two sentences per space. You shouldnt space it out like this It seems more like a poem Rather than a story.

Who is it by? If you look under the thread title it says eoin colfer

It was good But could be better. Didn't quite understand what you were aiming at there bud.

I read The prohpecy books. The ones with brambleclaw and squirell paw anmd other clan cats journey to save the clans from being destroyed by twolegs.

Its supposed to suck considering my friend did "His father's ring" And so I made the grammar horrible just like his. And the Puncuation .

Very short, and not much of a song, but more of a lyrical problem. BTW did your dad get in trouble with racism when he did that LOL.

Very interesting, If you post guitar chords I'll play, most certainly.

I didn't know whether to laugh or cry. Good comparisons though, but extremely painful to read. Space it out more.

You may want to put a little more effort into it there. It was kind of weak, but if you added more it could be really cool. Not to dramatic ...