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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Masked Blood

    Ehh whatsup doc? Nice story you wrote here. Honestly I am impressed. I do sort of like how it starts out sort of in the middle so the story unravels ...

    Sep 21, 2008
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Renesme

    Wow. Hmm. It's awkward to know a vampire, only 5 years old in human years, is getting married. Is she still the same size? Is she taller than that of ...

    Sep 14, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Writing's No Good

    Kind of depressing if you think about it. I can solely relate to this. In class I would sit and stare at a white piece of paper for half the ...

    Jun 11, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Wolf That Cried "Boy!"

    I know your just ten, but your grammar is atrocious. You need to work on your spelling a little bit. I read in your profile you don't care about grammar. ...

    Jun 11, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: He's gay now.

    It was a good poem, but I'm not one who really likes discussing Homosexuality. It is in a wierd style, and I wouldn't recommend it because its pretty hard to ...

    Jun 4, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Smile, and the World Stops Breathing

    It was okay, but not fantastic. Infact, this poem is on the shorter side. The title, honestly doesn't fit in, and one sentence I didn't think was fit was "And ...

    May 29, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Unhappy Father’s Day

    Dark and really disturbing. It was a nice poem, but it was confusing. The boy was dead, but still alive? And the poem title doesn't really fit in with the ...

    May 26, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Two Stars in the Night Sky

    Why bother whipping it away for there ” This should be Wiping not whipping. Other than a few grammar mistakes and the complications of reading this story it was all ...

    May 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Approval

    I think its trying to get a cross the fact that people only notice people when the suffer. But it's very dark when I read it. But then again, I'm ...

    May 4, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Anniversary

    I love this! Its very funny and is very....unique I guess is the word I'm looking for. It was very nice and made good sense. Just like most poetry though, ...

    Apr 14, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: lost inside my heart

    This was extremely touching. I loved the idea and thought that it was good poem It ended great and it was a blast to read. I read it 3 times ...

    Apr 14, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Has Anyone Here read The Warriors Series?

    Yes! I love the Warrior series!! I've read the entire first collection and I'm trying to find the forth one in the second prophecy! I've got the feild guide and ...

    Apr 14, 2008


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